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08-12-09, 07:37 PM
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4. what do u think? (silhoutte)

very glowing morning sun
i made the sun hide behind his right side head
but still the glow where stealing sights of my camera.

later i over shadowed the guy with the camera.



     
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08-12-09, 08:36 PM
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Re: 4. what do u think? (silhoutte)

I think it's an interesting picture, personally i think the sky is a bit harsh for me and i would have cropped to take out the man on the right, but i'm no expert so others may think differently, nevertheless, it looks an interesting picture.
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08-12-09, 10:57 PM
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Re: 4. what do u think? (silhoutte)

I'd crop off some of the top and the guy on the right...
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08-12-09, 11:32 PM
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Re: 4. what do u think? (silhoutte)

I prefer the natural look with photos whereas other prefer the more abstract look, for me this photo is neither one nor the other.. There is nothing wrong with the composition, but many photographers get carried away with the editing side of photography and loose sight of the final outcome, something to be aware of.
Like any picture everyone sees the same picture in a different way and at the end of the day its what the photographer is happy with that counts.

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09-12-09, 02:19 AM
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Re: 4. what do u think? (silhoutte)

I agree that cropping out the figure without the camera would be a good move. I think I'd have shot it differently myself, the man with the camera I'd have preferred more to the edge of the frame, looking into the photograph. I also think that the pale orange flare on the photographer's head is distracting, and would be better cloned out, and also, I think the sky is a bit harsh for my tastes, and too blown. However, I do see what you were aiming for I think, and you've done a good job to try!

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09-12-09, 07:47 AM
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Re: 4. what do u think? (silhoutte)

overall, a striking and interesting image. Well seen.
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09-12-09, 12:11 PM
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Re: 4. what do u think? (silhoutte)

HERE I CROPPED IT
TOOK THAT GUY OUT

NOW, WHAT DO U LIKE TO SAY AFTER THE CROPPING.



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09-12-09, 12:18 PM
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Much better, I like it a lot!

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09-12-09, 01:47 PM
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Re: 4. what do u think? (silhoutte)

I would maybe try loosing a bit off the top and bottom now and see how that works and maybe a little bit more from the right.
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