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29-06-08, 03:28 PM
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At first, some photos of flowers:









Currant:



Blueberry:

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29-06-08, 04:20 PM
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Re: Nature

Wow they are stunning - can't select a fave as they are all ace
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29-06-08, 05:02 PM
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Amazing pics! Sorry not experienced enough to critique, I like them as they are anyway .
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29-06-08, 05:10 PM
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Re: Nature

Oops! Sorry I missed the C&C bit

I really can't fault them, the only thing I would suggest:

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The leaf on the left, I'd have removed it first perhaps...

But other than that I think they're spot on
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30-06-08, 12:30 PM
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Re: Nature

Polo: Thanks

Azz: I will try to do it your way and show you...
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30-06-08, 02:40 PM
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My fav is the third one, that one is perfect in every sense.
The other ones are good too, but almost all of them have some distraction in the background (picture 1,2,4 and 5) or the composition is a bit weaker (picture 5,6).
I donīt like much the blueberry, because thereīs too much empty space on the right, I think this shot would come out better as a square.
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30-06-08, 04:06 PM
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Re: Nature

Mirka thanks!

So, different colors in background are not very nice even if they are blured? I did not know that, and now, they actually bother me too... Specially 1. (bottom right corner) and 4. ( to bright green). I will try to correct this in PS.

About photos 5. and 6., I was trying to take picture in 1/3 to 2/3. First one 2/3 of currant and 1/3 empty space (horizontal), second one is meant the same, except this one is vertical.
So, you thing a square will be better? I will try this too..

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30-06-08, 06:42 PM
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i really like the first four pictures , agree they have a distracting background but the flowers are in beautiful colours!
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01-07-08, 12:39 PM
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Clairelou: Thanks!

And what about this one?

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01-07-08, 02:02 PM
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Mirka thanks!

So, different colors in background are not very nice even if they are blured? I did not know that, and now, they actually bother me too... Specially 1. (bottom right corner) and 4. ( to bright green). I will try to correct this in PS.
I think they can be nice, but if they are not blurred enough, they are distracting. Sometimes they are distracting anyways, especially if thereīs just a bit "peeking" somewhere, like with the rose.

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About photos 5. and 6., I was trying to take picture in 1/3 to 2/3. First one 2/3 of currant and 1/3 empty space (horizontal), second one is meant the same, except this one is vertical.
So, you thing a square will be better? I will try this too..

Thanks for all the tips!
I figured you were trying to fit it within the rules. But for me it simply did not work well on these shots. Especially the blueberry.
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