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11-09-09, 10:42 AM
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Flower

trying to take a photos of something other than dogs. Please feel free to critique.

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11-09-09, 11:28 AM
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Re: Flower

Not bad at all - though the light is a bit harsh - did you use the on camera flash? Try getting photos of flowers in good natural light - it can create really pleasing effects. I notice the little bug too - he's nicely captured, but may be more noticable if he was closer to the centre!

A great effort though - Well done!

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11-09-09, 12:10 PM
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Re: Flower

Nice try L!

Agree with Z about the light, natural light is much better than on-camera flash - give it a go, there should be a setting on your camera to turn off the flash
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11-09-09, 02:33 PM
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Re: Flower

Looks good! the texture and the bug are great. Don't stop now!
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