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16-06-09, 06:58 PM
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It's Summer

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16-06-09, 07:17 PM
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Re: It's Summer

Not a fan of this one, can't put my finger on it, but it's definitely lacking something - perhaps it's that it has no real focal point for me? Sorry!

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16-06-09, 07:22 PM
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Re: It's Summer

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lacking something - perhaps it's that it has no real focal point for me? Sorry!

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Is the bandstand too small?


     
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16-06-09, 08:04 PM
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Re: It's Summer

Looks good - maybe it would have been better without the peope - or without the people cut-off?
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16-06-09, 09:33 PM
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Re: It's Summer

No, it's not too small I just think it's a bit bland for a focal point, my eye wanders around the photo, and the bandstand looks crooked at the roof point - also, it lacks any real vibrancy - it just looks a bit flat. Sorry! I think perhaps getting rid of the OOF people and bikes may help? But then, I'm not sure the bandstand merits a photo on its own, at this angle... :/

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