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Summerhouse
Tia again
this time posing by the lake,
Sorry, if you are getting bored of my kids, but they are always available
xx
Thanks for looking x
this time posing by the lake,Sorry, if you are getting bored of my kids, but they are always available
xxThanks for looking x
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This is fantastic! I am so loving this one, she looks so relaxed and happy, well done.
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I like it Moon 
If I was being picky, the shadow/pp filter on her right side of the face has made a bump appear - you could PP that to bring it in line with the contour of her face?
If I was being picky, the shadow/pp filter on her right side of the face has made a bump appear - you could PP that to bring it in line with the contour of her face?
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Arggghhh! you are right the shadow has given her bump where she hasn't got one, will have a go editing it 
Thanks for the feedback x
I will sack my assistant who held the reflector, Lukehave to blame someone
Thanks for the feedback xI will sack my assistant who held the reflector, Luke
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Quick edit, think it will be better to just retake it though
Oh bugger, was pleased with this too
Suzi x
Oh bugger, was pleased with this too
Suzi x
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Nice pic Moonie, sort of creamy PP effect, bit small on my monitor but can see the little issue though.
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What a lovely picture 
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Suzi, it is a lovely shot but me being me there has to be a but. If you are taking it again could we try for a little more skin detail, it looks smooth and on the point of blowing, if you wanted it that way fair enough but I think it would be nice if her skin was more peach like which I am sure it is. Of course, it is more than possible that it is lost in the compression needed to get it on to the Internet.
Something else that has struck me, was she either wearing no makeup or a shimmering make up, IMO matt gives a better finish for the camera with perhaps just gentle and carefully applies highlights. Or am I so far out of date to be prehistoric,
probably
Something else that has struck me, was she either wearing no makeup or a shimmering make up, IMO matt gives a better finish for the camera with perhaps just gentle and carefully applies highlights. Or am I so far out of date to be prehistoric,
probably
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That's an adoreable shot Suzi. It's such an innocent smile, totally relaxed. You can tell she's not camera shy. Nice use of vignetting to draw the eye to the face.
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Originally Posted by BlackCloud
Nice pic Moonie, sort of creamy PP effect, bit small on my monitor but can see the little issue though.
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Originally Posted by ole bird
What a lovely picture
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Originally Posted by Snapper
Suzi, it is a lovely shot but me being me there has to be a but. If you are taking it again could we try for a little more skin detail, it looks smooth and on the point of blowing, if you wanted it that way fair enough but I think it would be nice if her skin was more peach like which I am sure it is. Of course, it is more than possible that it is lost in the compression needed to get it on to the Internet.
Something else that has struck me, was she either wearing no makeup or a shimmering make up, IMO matt gives a better finish for the camera with perhaps just gentle and carefully applies highlights. Or am I so far out of date to be prehistoric, probably
Something else that has struck me, was she either wearing no makeup or a shimmering make up, IMO matt gives a better finish for the camera with perhaps just gentle and carefully applies highlights. Or am I so far out of date to be prehistoric,
probablyI haven't done any PP to her skin
I just converted to mono, and added a vignette to draw you into her face rather than look at the summerhouse.
Thank you , will have another look and try probably
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Originally Posted by bobmielke
That's an adoreable shot Suzi. It's such an innocent smile, totally relaxed. You can tell she's not camera shy. Nice use of vignetting to draw the eye to the face.
Thank you Bob, she isn't camera shy, but reluctant to pose for me
xxThanks for the feedback everyone xx