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13-02-09, 04:53 PM
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Intimacy Project *Nude*

This is a photo I took of my ex for a project at uni, its currently in an exhibtion there.
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13-02-09, 05:28 PM
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Re: Intimacy Project *Nude*

I like it - it's quite different! She looks so at peace - was she posing or was it a natural shot of her sleeping? It's very good either way.
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14-02-09, 03:24 AM
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Re: Intimacy Project *Nude*

She was sleeping....at the time it was quite a romantic shot....obviously has different meaning now lol xx
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14-02-09, 02:52 PM
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Re: Intimacy Project *Nude*

I quite like it, but I think I'd like to have seen a bit more of the arm in the foreground also, the flare I find a bit distracting, but that could just be me. The bedclothes are a bit swirly and distracting too... sorry - I've torn it to pieces! basically, I do really like it, there are a few tweaks here and there, if you could go back and take the shot again, which you can't obviously!

Well done!

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14-02-09, 03:45 PM
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Re: Intimacy Project *Nude*

Lol no i definitely won't be taking it again ha ha x
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15-02-09, 03:40 PM
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Re: Intimacy Project *Nude*

She does look at peace, it's a nice shot, I actually like the lens flare.

Sorry things didn't work out hun xxxx


     
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15-02-09, 05:09 PM
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Re: Intimacy Project *Nude*

i'm wondering if she would go nuts if she saw it posted on here?


     
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15-02-09, 05:20 PM
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Re: Intimacy Project *Nude*

She's posed in the nude for Lorna before Jack those threads got moved to the sharing section in the midst of changes, I just never got round to putting them back.
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15-02-09, 06:54 PM
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Re: Intimacy Project *Nude*

I like it too Lorna, it is however one of those shots I want to wipe, now people will think me mad, it is just like a thin mist that I want to wipe away so I can see better, could be that was your intention.

Would think if it is on display at the collage then she would not mind it on here.

Sad to hear it has not worked out.
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15-02-09, 09:51 PM
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Re: Intimacy Project *Nude*

i like it, im sure if she was happy for it to be part of an exhibition she would be to have it here. After all i bet a lot, if not all of the candid shots posted on this site of people don't have their permission to post on the Internet ... i.e the street youths, native girl ? my beggar certainly didn't sign a model release form lol


     
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