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10-10-07, 10:51 AM
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not sure if i like this ,what do you think? c&c please maybe im just fussy lol

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10-10-07, 03:58 PM
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Re: teasel

I quite like it! Maybe have given it a little extra breathing room on the left?
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10-10-07, 06:44 PM
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Re: teasel

Good effort, but for my money, the background is too busy - too distracting.
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10-10-07, 07:13 PM
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Re: teasel

It is a very nice shot but IMO the background is distracting (the bokeh isn't the best either). A shallower DoF might have helped?
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10-10-07, 07:26 PM
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Re: teasel

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I quite like it! Maybe have given it a little extra breathing room on the left?
sorted ! is this what you mean?

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10-10-07, 07:31 PM
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Re: teasel

ah that why i was`nt sure if i like it , should have had a colour card or something in the background , btw what a bokeh? read it in the mag before but didnt understand it?
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10-10-07, 07:44 PM
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Re: teasel

Bokeh is a photographic term referring to the appearance of out-of-focus areas in an image produced by a camera lens.
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