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06-07-08, 09:18 PM
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Deer walking

Sorry another pic. I think the back grounds is distracting, again . What do you think?
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06-07-08, 10:42 PM
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Re: Deer walking

Lovely colours in that Polo
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18-07-08, 01:04 PM
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Re: Deer walking

I don't think the background is too distracting, but you could dull it down if you wanted. There is something on the left hand side that's distracting me though, and the colours look brighter (don't know about more focused) on the body, the face seems to be the second thing you're drawn too, but could just be me...
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18-07-08, 01:41 PM
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Re: Deer walking

Think I want to step back a step or two and have more background in front of the subject and less behind. Think if it was not so close the background would cease to be a problem. Think the grass is a strange colour but I can't off advice about that you will need one of the clever ones
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29-07-08, 06:34 PM
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Re: Deer walking

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I don't think the background is too distracting, but you could dull it down if you wanted. There is something on the left hand side that's distracting me though, and the colours look brighter (don't know about more focused) on the body, the face seems to be the second thing you're drawn too, but could just be me...
At that age the deer's coat color will be more vibrant than the face, legs, etc.
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