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18-02-12, 10:39 PM
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My practice so far.

please feel free to comment on composition so I can improve








one man and the moon






erm, the tree of...?




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18-02-12, 11:27 PM
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Re: My practice so far.

A mixed bag indeed, 4 the street scene, i find appealing, although for me the sepia images seem a bit too washed out, i also like the steps. Just my opinion so dont take too much notice.


     
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19-02-12, 12:56 AM
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thanks mossy, appreciate the feedback, thanks for looking
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19-02-12, 04:39 AM
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Re: My practice so far.

I agree that some look a little washed out, and need a bit of a contrast boost - but I really like number 1

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19-02-12, 09:38 AM
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number 1 the street and the steps for me.......... but as said some look a little washed out or hazy......
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19-02-12, 01:13 PM
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Doesn't look like you had much help from the sky there Natalie as a result the ones that fill the frame work best.

I really like the stairs and the street ( clone out the tope of the gates that intrude into the scene ) and concentrate on leading the eye to that lovely building.

As Laura says..get a little more contrast going and you should see a real improvement ad you frame upa shot very nicely indeed.


     
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19-02-12, 01:33 PM
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That's a lot of shots there Natalie, I like 6 and 8 the best.

I quite like shot 4, but I find it a little to dark.
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19-02-12, 05:27 PM
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Not a bad set of images Natalie. 4,6 & 8 for me if i had to choose
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19-02-12, 06:15 PM
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Thanks all,i really appreciate the comments. I've got myself a little notepad and pen to keep in my camera bag, so I will be writing down some stuff to bear in mind...
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19-02-12, 07:44 PM
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the steps are brilliant


     
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