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17-02-12, 09:28 PM
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This photo just isn't right but like Ken http://www.yophotographer.com/page.php?t=16341 I love it.

here's mine.


I suspect it is the verticals and the focal point being wrong.

Any advice?


     
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17-02-12, 09:29 PM
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and anyone else got a pic that is almost there and could use some input?

Worth a try eh admin!


     
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17-02-12, 09:59 PM
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I like this a lot... though I agree that something is making my eyes weird! Great tones though.

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18-02-12, 12:44 AM
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I have one I got the other day with the point and shoot. Everything about it is wrong.... but I like it



     
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18-02-12, 12:45 AM
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yep the chain is going through the left hand birds head


     
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18-02-12, 12:47 AM
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Minor technicality


     
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18-02-12, 12:59 AM
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I need some lessons on composition I think Daisy

It's not always easy trying to do justice to the potential shot that is in front of me, but it's fun trying.
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18-02-12, 11:50 AM
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Originally Posted by Daisy View Post
This photo just isn't right but like Ken http://www.yophotographer.com/page.php?t=16341 I love it.

here's mine.


I suspect it is the verticals and the focal point being wrong.

Any advice?
I agree with Laura about the tones but for me the wall and the stumps are to much in the foreground and blocking the shot..
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18-02-12, 11:54 AM
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I agree Owen, I think there is way too much going on!


     
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