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12-02-12, 04:38 PM
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Portrait orientation - take 2

Thanks for all the feedback on my previous portrait attempt. Another one here...without the muzzle

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12-02-12, 05:00 PM
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Re: Portrait orientation - take 2

Looks great without his muzzle on. Good photo Melanie, but personally i would crop a little more off the right hand side, not much, maybe 2cm or so. Just a little too much empty space there at the moment. Other than that it looks good, Axel is stood at a perfect angle, head forward, body to the side slightly I wish i could get mine to stand still for this long
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12-02-12, 05:23 PM
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Re: Portrait orientation - take 2

Much better without the muzzle, still love those ears
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12-02-12, 06:26 PM
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12-02-12, 06:57 PM
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Re: Portrait orientation - take 2

brilliant picture...............


     
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12-02-12, 07:41 PM
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Re: Portrait orientation - take 2

Very nice Melanie much better without the muzzle.
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13-02-12, 10:29 AM
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Re: Portrait orientation - take 2

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Looks great without his muzzle on. Good photo Melanie, but personally i would crop a little more off the right hand side, not much, maybe 2cm or so. Just a little too much empty space there at the moment. Other than that it looks good, Axel is stood at a perfect angle, head forward, body to the side slightly I wish i could get mine to stand still for this long
Thank you I will give that a go Axel stands still, but he seems to have a knack for as I'm pressing the button he blinks, or moves his head slightly or sneezes...

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Much better without the muzzle, still love those ears
Thanks, I agree about the muzzle

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Looking good.
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brilliant picture...............
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Very nice Melanie much better without the muzzle.
Thank you
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16-02-12, 08:22 PM
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Re: Portrait orientation - take 2

Not at all a bad shot, but I prefer the take 3 shots

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