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These are the elments in your shots that I'm becoming used to Daisy 
Shapes, patterns and a wicked sky
Well done!
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Shapes, patterns and a wicked sky Well done!
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Needs a wee straighten and crop ..but hey..what do you want from a visit to Llidl? 
Thanks mate.
Thanks mate.
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yes, maybe a degree to the right and a little off the right hand side...
Those your thoughts?
Those your thoughts?
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Wow, that's wonderful Daisy, I like the comp and the light especially the way the sun has come out and you still have the dark cloudy skies in the BG, it adds more drama to the buildings.
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Nice work D
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I really like the light and the sky, and the positions of all the different buildings, and architecture in relation to each other.
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Agree with Suzi, fab shot, though I would have perhaps boosted the contrast a little but only the slightest touch!
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but only the slightest touch! xx
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Well spotted, as you say, could do with straightening and cropping. Think I'd be tempted to crop about 10-15% off the right so the crop line on the right was right up to the first pillar in of the doorway so the block of flats is right to the edge of the frame. I'd also crop the bottom, just above the horizontal frame within the arch. I think that shows off the industrial urban landscape a lot starker with those crops. Bit of a play with dodge and burn and bringing up the highlights and I reckon you have a nice punchy image.
It's always worth having a camera if you can. You never know.
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Tiz very good.
Reminds me of the short sequences prior to programmes on Channel 4 where all the elements move together to make the number "4".
Steve
Reminds me of the short sequences prior to programmes on Channel 4 where all the elements move together to make the number "4".
Steve
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