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23-04-11, 11:03 AM
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Monika

This is my first go at combining two images.

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23-04-11, 12:08 PM
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Re: Monika

Very effective Jeff, I like the idea and effect as a whole, although I think it would look a little better with less transparency of the model.
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23-04-11, 12:31 PM
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Re: Monika

Very nice work Jeff. I love the composition, selective focus and background. It doesn't hurt that the young lady is beautiful as well. Nicely done vignette. Good job, certainly a keeper for your portfolio!
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23-04-11, 03:17 PM
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Re: Monika

Thanks lads, cc always appreciated. I have quite a lot of pictures from the shoot with Monika, she is a fantastic model.

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23-04-11, 09:19 PM
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Re: Monika

Love it but there's something not right with the hand/flower area.
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23-04-11, 10:21 PM
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Re: Monika

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Love it but there's something not right with the hand/flower area.
Yes I know it's not quite right, the area is OOF and the hand looks a little odd from that angle.

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23-04-11, 10:27 PM
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Re: Monika

This is another from the set I particularly like.

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24-04-11, 12:34 AM
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Re: Monika

Stunning, absolutely stunning. Love the natural blurred depth of field, the angle of the head/torso, the expression, everything. That's one beautiful model.
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24-04-11, 12:43 AM
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Re: Monika

Thanks Bob, the session with Monika is some of my best work IMO.

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24-04-11, 01:49 AM
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Re: Monika

Jeff love the second image, not so keen on the first, think it's the hand, but the second image is wonderful x x


     
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