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21-01-11, 05:46 AM
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Raptor in flight



Think I am getting there with this type of photography but comments welcome

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21-01-11, 09:29 AM
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Re: Raptor in flight

Very good, Bazza. Needs to have the hair that you have on the mirror/sensor cloned out though.
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21-01-11, 09:46 AM
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Re: Raptor in flight

Nicely done Would like to see the original crop though, as personally I would like to see more space to the right.

I did notice some blown highlights on the head. For whites, I underexpose by around 2 stops to keep the detail, and bring back any shadow detail in photoshop x


     
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21-01-11, 10:08 AM
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Re: Raptor in flight

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That "hair" is actually the radio transmitter aerial so that the bird can be located if it flies away.

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21-01-11, 10:41 AM
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Re: Raptor in flight

Oh! I see. Still needs cloning out though.
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21-01-11, 01:59 PM
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Re: Raptor in flight

Nicely done Bazza

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I did notice some blown highlights on the head. For whites, I underexpose by around 2 stops to keep the detail, and bring back any shadow detail in photoshop x
....and for 'fast' white things - underexposing = slightly faster shutter speed. Sometimes enough to buy you a little bit back on the ISO.
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21-01-11, 04:59 PM
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Re: Raptor in flight

Good tips above - I'd clone the 'hair' out too and would like to see a version not so heavily cropped (seems noisy?). But aside from that - nice work!
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21-01-11, 06:08 PM
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I think thats Bokeh Azz, rather than noise.


     
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21-01-11, 07:24 PM
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Re: Raptor in flight

Seems to be a visible dithering DC - possibly jpeg compression - if highly compressed for the save :/
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