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06-11-10, 10:55 PM
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Autumn Berries

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07-11-10, 12:29 PM
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Re: Autumn Berries

Not sure about the focus on this one - my eye is drawn to the OOF berries at the front, and I think the picture is just a bit too busy really, and my eye can't settle at all. Perhaps try closing in on one cluster, and getting down to eye level with them?

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07-11-10, 07:10 PM
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Re: Autumn Berries

I have to agree with Z.
They are gorgeous berries, but their cluttered surroundings are very distracting.
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