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09-06-10, 03:56 PM
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Eye Of A Killer

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09-06-10, 04:05 PM
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Re: Eye Of A Killer

Nice shot Ste - tho I feel it's a little too tightly framed and could do with some breathing space. Great shot tho nonetheless.
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09-06-10, 04:14 PM
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Re: Eye Of A Killer

Have to disagree with you Azz, I wanted it tight. There is space for it to look into, the dead space there would be with a wider crop would be a waste of the frame.

The shot is about the eye, any wider and it starts getting lost. A portrait doesn't have to have space around the head imho.
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09-06-10, 04:33 PM
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Re: Eye Of A Killer

I guess it's just personal preference - I kinda like the one you did here (second one) - they're both nice tho
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09-06-10, 05:29 PM
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Re: Eye Of A Killer

really like this, beautiful.


     
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09-06-10, 06:50 PM
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Re: Eye Of A Killer

Lovely detail, but it's cropped to tightly for me.
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09-06-10, 07:11 PM
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Re: Eye Of A Killer

Great shot - clear and sharp. It's amazing how clean his beak is - do you do any work on it?
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09-06-10, 07:33 PM
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Re: Eye Of A Killer

Lovely clear image, but I agree that the crop is too tight, it needs just a little more space at the bottom. It wouldn't need much more, but at the moment it is an uncomfortable crop.
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10-06-10, 05:31 PM
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Very intense, and I am undecided on the crop, but the actual picture is superb, excellent quality XX


     
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12-06-10, 11:09 PM
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Re: Eye Of A Killer

@Stanokella

I agree with your cropping comments. I am a fan of the tight crop for portraits and I might have cropped this one even more tightly to accentuiate the eye. Great work.
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