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08-12-09, 01:19 PM
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3. what do u think? (posing sea)

it was early cold morning. sea was so silent and calm.
my friend (MUK) lens was pointing to nowhere like someone invisible was posing for him.
he was searching a good shot and looking at one point in complete concentration.

at that moment I just felt like, I found a good shot for myself.



     
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08-12-09, 05:37 PM
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Re: 3. what do u think? (posing sea)

I quite like the composition of that
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08-12-09, 06:10 PM
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Re: 3. what do u think? (posing sea)

that shot has pleasing tones and a nice balance about it
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08-12-09, 06:30 PM
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Re: 3. what do u think? (posing sea)

Thank you Azz

and Thank you Little one

Both of you, liked it and placed ur comments.
I really appreciate that

Ok. can u pls tell me what can make it better !!??
i want to learn. pls.


     
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08-12-09, 11:42 PM
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Re: 3. what do u think? (posing sea)

You might like to consider the softness of the sea against the sharpness of the man. Also you are clashing whats natural (the sea/rocks) against human and his camera.
Where you have the human influence on a shoreline, ie man made objects and people, then the two work well together. In your photo it is mainly made up of nature (sea,sky,rocks) so possibly just work with that, with a little more in the photo of the rocks as foreground and less of the sea. Photographic rule of three may apply.


Watch all this video for rule of thirds, last part of video may help




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09-12-09, 02:16 AM
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Re: 3. what do u think? (posing sea)

I think the photo works very well, but I would clone out the small black line at the top, almost in the centre, it's rather distracting to my eye anyway! Perhaps also the top corner is a bit blown (overexposed) - but overall it's a lovely shot, and with gorgeous composition!

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09-12-09, 07:44 AM
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Re: 3. what do u think? (posing sea)

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You might like to consider the softness of the sea against the sharpness of the man. Also you are clashing whats natural (the sea/rocks) against human and his camera.

Bazza

Bazza, That was so impressive.
I really like the way how you describe the deepness of pictures.
you too got two eyes like we all do, but man, u see more in the pictures.

Thanking u a lot for giving me the video.
I downloaded that.

From yesterday I started learning from YoP.
I checked "Composition" as told by AZZ.

Maybe my pictures are out of questions, no rules applied totally. LOL.
Hope, In the future sure You'll see

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09-12-09, 07:50 AM
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Re: 3. what do u think? (posing sea)

the rule of thirds is a good starting point, but I think in the case, the balance is just right.
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09-12-09, 07:58 AM
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Re: 3. what do u think? (posing sea)

Zoundz, thank you so much for placing ur valuable comment.
I were right . I must try how u said.

here below u'll see the pic again after another cropping service. LOL

I cropped some parts from UP and Right sides.
Tell me pls, what could I do else.


     
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09-12-09, 12:14 PM
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Re: 3. what do u think? (posing sea)

@LITTLE ME

Thank you for liking.
u will see more.
be there pls


     
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