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old friend/new friend
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Welcome to Yop! 
2 lovely photos there, thank you for sharing - beautiful friends!
My advice on the first is to be careful about framing the shot, you've just nicked the ear slightly, and that can spoil - a bit of headroom is lovely. The second shot is my favourite - lovely and clear, lovely colours - but be careful about the background, the door is a little distracting. Perhaps the pup would have been better placed on the grass? The image seems slightly soft around the eyes? I'm nto sure where the focus point was when you took this image, but I find it always makes a big difference to photos of things with eyes when the eyes are in tack sharp focus!
Hope you don't mind me giving you a bit of critique - they are basically lovely shots - so thank you for sharing them!
xx
2 lovely photos there, thank you for sharing - beautiful friends!
My advice on the first is to be careful about framing the shot, you've just nicked the ear slightly, and that can spoil - a bit of headroom is lovely. The second shot is my favourite - lovely and clear, lovely colours - but be careful about the background, the door is a little distracting. Perhaps the pup would have been better placed on the grass?
The image seems slightly soft around the eyes? I'm nto sure where the focus point was when you took this image, but I find it always makes a big difference to photos of things with eyes when the eyes are in tack sharp focus! Hope you don't mind me giving you a bit of critique - they are basically lovely shots - so thank you for sharing them!
xx
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Nice dogs you have there Paul! Out of the two photos, 1's me fave
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Welcome yop,
lovely photos of your dogs
lovely photos of your dogs
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Originally Posted by Zoundz
Welcome to Yop!
2 lovely photos there, thank you for sharing - beautiful friends!
My advice on the first is to be careful about framing the shot, you've just nicked the ear slightly, and that can spoil - a bit of headroom is lovely. The second shot is my favourite - lovely and clear, lovely colours - but be careful about the background, the door is a little distracting. Perhaps the pup would have been better placed on the grass? The image seems slightly soft around the eyes? I'm nto sure where the focus point was when you took this image, but I find it always makes a big difference to photos of things with eyes when the eyes are in tack sharp focus!
Hope you don't mind me giving you a bit of critique - they are basically lovely shots - so thank you for sharing them!
xx
2 lovely photos there, thank you for sharing - beautiful friends!
My advice on the first is to be careful about framing the shot, you've just nicked the ear slightly, and that can spoil - a bit of headroom is lovely. The second shot is my favourite - lovely and clear, lovely colours - but be careful about the background, the door is a little distracting. Perhaps the pup would have been better placed on the grass?
The image seems slightly soft around the eyes? I'm nto sure where the focus point was when you took this image, but I find it always makes a big difference to photos of things with eyes when the eyes are in tack sharp focus! Hope you don't mind me giving you a bit of critique - they are basically lovely shots - so thank you for sharing them!
xx
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Lovely dogs, like the pictures too.
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