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19-11-09, 05:33 AM
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Flower with fly

I am sticking my head over the parapet to say out loud that I do like this one
I do like black and white layering usually but this one seemed to suit antique`d sepia, your thoughts on that [ yay or nay ] and suggestions for improvements generally would be much appreciated

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19-11-09, 12:24 PM
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Re: Flower with fly

I'm not 100% sure it works for me, but I can see why it would work for others! You have the expoure on the petals down very very well indeed - with practically no blown highlights - which is excellent! White flowers are often hard to snap. Odd for me to say it - but shame about the fly - the flower is so delicate, andwith your PP I think it would work better without the fly - but then, the fly is very well caught.

I think you've done a grand job with it Patch! Well done!

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19-11-09, 04:30 PM
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Re: Flower with fly

Like the composition Patch!
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19-11-09, 06:34 PM
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Re: Flower with fly

Nice PP work there.
I agree with Zoundz that I am not sure how well it works as a total image - something about that effect doesn't work for me with the fly - but still a great job.
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