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30-12-07, 10:31 AM
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Re: rings2

teignmouth in devon. near where i live
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30-12-07, 10:32 AM
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30-12-07, 11:49 AM
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Re: rings2

Nice sign
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30-12-07, 11:49 AM
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Nice colours Jols - I like the way you have framed the shot
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30-12-07, 10:32 PM
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Re: rings2

Great pic love the colours.
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10-01-08, 07:13 PM
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rings/flowers

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could it be better.
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10-01-08, 07:35 PM
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Re: rings2

Personally for me, im unsure what the subject focus is? Its a nice shot and well exposed but my eyes arent drawn to anything in particular.

If its a ring shot, the emphasis needs to be on the rings and the detail there in. Maybe shoot from above next ime with the flowers blurred underneath to provide a nice backdrop.

If its the flowers, maybe lay them on a mid height object or even the ground, Use a shallow DoF feild to keep the bouquet in focus but have the bride and groom in the distant background


     
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10-01-08, 09:40 PM
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Re: rings2

She's mostly in the shadow, and I don't know if it's reflective of real life, but his fingers look really chubby/fat(/wrong?) also her rings look too small for her making her finger look a bit fat/wrong too.

So I would zoom out to get their head and shoulders in the shot too or try another more 'flattering' angle.
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12-01-08, 04:02 PM
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blurred background help

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another of my attempt i know the lighting is duff but hows my dof.

i need the fimble to be sharper help!!!
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12-01-08, 04:05 PM
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here is
another of my attempt i know the lighting is duff but hows my dof.

i need the fimble to be sharper help!!!
whats your exif data hun?


     
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