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18-01-09, 11:57 PM
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Re: New Intro Page

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Thanks hun! Erm there shouldnt be any horizontal lines?! So not quite sure what that is! Ill have another bash at it in the morning!
Sorry - don't know why I wrote horizontal, they are vertical (just to confuse you further!)
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19-01-09, 07:53 AM
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Re: New Intro Page

I like the clean look of the page and the simple, easy to follow navigation.

I use Adblock on Firefox and notice that it is blocking two ads, one under the three full stops following "Welcome" and one to the left of the boy's elbow.

But.... there is something weird going on

When I first open the page there are no scroll bars but as I mouse around the page a scroll bar appears at the bottom of the page and slowly, the page starts to grow wider. I am viewing at 1680 x 1050.

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19-01-09, 09:12 AM
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Re: New Intro Page

K it all works for me.

In the investment page the word wedding only has one 'd'. The image on the presentation page is a bit confusing.If it is a bride then she is overpowered by the other elements.

Apart from that everything is fine and looks very soft and friendly. I'm not too keen on the sparkly cursor but that is personal preference.

Goodluck wiuh it all.
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19-01-09, 09:27 AM
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Re: New Intro Page

I think its great and very professional.

I would take out a few pics of your boys and substitute them with some clients photos or borrow some kids from somewhere and do a complimentary shoot to build up the portfolio.

Also I think your first package price is too cheap [for your skill] up it by £20 at least.

hope this helps.
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22-01-09, 10:27 AM
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Re: New Intro Page

they are fantastic KK !
i love the "pink snow" falling from the mouse and great choice of colours, very creamy like icing on the cakes yummy
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22-01-09, 03:44 PM
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Re: New Intro Page

Lovely website KK Easy to navigate, great colors, & love the softness of it - very nice


     
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