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12-07-08, 05:59 PM
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Cygnet

Yet another C&C. Thanks guys. This was taken at Dunham Massey today.
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12-07-08, 08:27 PM
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Re: Cygnet

Lovely shot Polo!
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12-07-08, 10:16 PM
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Re: Cygnet

Ahh that looks lovely. It's a bit dark on my screen but I think it's my computer.
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13-07-08, 09:52 AM
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Re: Cygnet

Hope you don't mind:

The pic is lovely and sharp the pic is a little dark however, if you have PS look at the histogram, the whites need bringing up as there few whites in the pic.

I think the composition is a little off, as the space is all on the right and the little fella is looking left, I'd be tempted to take quite a bit off the right to leave the space in the frame for him to look into. Also maybe including the full reflection as his head is cut off.

Very nice use of dof to make the head and face the point of interest.


Hope that didn't offend you?
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13-07-08, 02:41 PM
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Re: Cygnet

Thanks for that Stanokella, no didn't offend me at all. Next time (hopefull today ) I'll frame it as you suggested (and adjust the settings better).
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