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I like it, and the butterflies are fine with me
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I like the creativity you have added to the shot but for me the expression just doesn't work - sorry. The butterflies are a nice touch and have come out well, the only other thing I would prefer to see would be to clone the sequins on her top where the flash has blown them out, that area is slightly distracting.
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I am sure that the expression means something to the family and sure that they will love it.
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Join Date: Aug 2008
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Originally Posted by Azz
The butterflies are what makes it unique, gives it that little something extra the client wouldn't have got from another less artistic tog.
My opinion, actually I think the idea works without the butterflies and simply expressed an opinion.
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No he hasnt Snaps 
It was my mistake - i meant BC
It was my mistake - i meant BC Wouldn't want him to take a hit on my behalf
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Originally Posted by BlackCloud
...thanks, I'll take that as a dig I'm less artistic then. Such a way with words mate.
My opinion, actually I think the idea works without the butterflies and simply expressed an opinion.
My opinion, actually I think the idea works without the butterflies and simply expressed an opinion.
You said you couldn't see the point in it - and I was just saying it's what makes the shoot different to what her clients would have got elsewhere (esp the less artistic ones). She's using her creative flair and it's these little touches that will make her stand out
Well that's what I've always believed hence done my best to push her in the direction.
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Portsmouth, Hants, England
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Originally Posted by BlackCloud
Good pic but can't really see the point of the butterflies and not really sure that is a flattering expression.
I kind of like it, but the fact that the girl is in the image on the wall, while her arms are in the real world is a bit confusing, I think it would have been better if the girl was reaching out of the frame in to the real world.
It's only a small observation, apart from that it's a nice image, and it's put together really well, it might have been an idea, as the world in the picture is a nice summer scene, to make the real world a grotty, run down place to really contrast the real world with the fantasy world, but it depends on what feel you are after I guess
All the best,
Alan.
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Join Date: Feb 2008
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I'm with WW, think that it would work a little better if she was coming out of the pic as it is a little confusing that she is "in" the pic and not with the arms outside the frame rather than coming from it.
I like the expression, gives the sense that she has her face against the glass in the frame and is trying to get out.
I like the expression, gives the sense that she has her face against the glass in the frame and is trying to get out.
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I like it I think its the colours that draw me in
I think its the colours that draw me in
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I Like it Sam! it makes your pictures stand out from others, and I bet your clients love um!
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