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19-05-09, 12:54 PM
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Puppy close up

I don't normally crop in this close so gave it a try.



     
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19-05-09, 01:25 PM
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Re: Puppy close up

I think because you cropped the nose and the ears off it doesn't work so well,
maybe if you go in closer towards the eyes it would work better.

But, still a lovely pic of an absolutely stunning pup. How do you get anything done, I would be constantly having cuddles and playing x


     
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19-05-09, 01:47 PM
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Re: Puppy close up

I agree with Suzi, Lovely image spoiled slightly by cropping the nose... perhaps an even tighter crop may rescue it? Focusing onthe eyes?

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19-05-09, 04:01 PM
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Re: Puppy close up

I agree about the crop being wrong. The composition suffers. The focus is also off and the photo appears underexposed. Keep shooting. Thanks for trying and asking for opinions.
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19-05-09, 04:22 PM
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Re: Puppy close up

Agree with the others, the proportions just don't seem 'right' :-/
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20-05-09, 04:27 PM
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Re: Puppy close up

Ok, thanks for comments!


     
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