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26-05-11, 01:19 PM
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26-05-11, 01:21 PM
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Re: Going to the island

Nice diagonal to the island, and, yet again, a lovely sky!

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26-05-11, 01:59 PM
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26-05-11, 02:12 PM
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Re: Going to the island

Not sure about this, it looks a little flat - like it needs a bit of a contrast boost? My eye wanders a bit - but it looks like it's a great subject matter that could be revisited? Perhaps on a day with better light? I think also, that if you could get the 'path' to go from the corner, diagonally, it might be a bit more leading for the eye

Well attempted though! Certainly scope here!

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26-05-11, 03:19 PM
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Re: Going to the island

I reckon it's crying out to be mono'd :d
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26-05-11, 04:06 PM
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Nah...didn't like it so removed it.


     
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26-05-11, 04:07 PM
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Now that I love! I think that has such a wonderful 60's feel to it! Beautiful!

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26-05-11, 04:08 PM
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Though, what has happened to the bottom corner, looks like it's been cut off? :/

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26-05-11, 04:12 PM
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Thanks Zounds..am still working on it but my editing suite keeps locking up.

Will post as soon as i can. lol xx


     
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26-05-11, 04:14 PM
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What a shame you didn't like it - I thought it was excellent!

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