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I like the concept and the colours are fab and warm however your DoF is extremely shallow. I cant see much of a focal point and it making my eyes go funny. Either try to bring your focal point forwards or use a smaller aperture 
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Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Newcastle
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Crop is too tight for my liking.
Where had you intended the focus to be? The lid isn't very interesting, but that's what it draws you to.
Where had you intended the focus to be? The lid isn't very interesting, but that's what it draws you to.
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Join Date: Sep 2007
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I like the way the writing is about burning 
if I use a shallow DoF ..I like the thing in the foreground to be the main focal point ...to get the lighter and the relevant writing in focus, I would have probably not used such a shallow DoF
if I use a shallow DoF ..I like the thing in the foreground to be the main focal point ...to get the lighter and the relevant writing in focus, I would have probably not used such a shallow DoF
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: South Wales, UK
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I remember Zippos lol
I agree the crop is a bit too tight too - otherwise nice shot
I agree the crop is a bit too tight too - otherwise nice shot
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