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23-10-09, 12:50 PM
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"Bianco" commercial



Another shot from the Amfi shoot.

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23-10-09, 01:02 PM
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Re: "Bianco" commercial

Far prefer this to the others, but I do think that the shoes in front of her floor foot are confusing and distracting - should not have covered the foot up with them, if you understand what I'm getting at - and again, blurry furniture in the foreground distracts, I would clone out that bench.

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23-10-09, 03:14 PM
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Re: "Bianco" commercial

Nice work Tommy!
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23-10-09, 05:48 PM
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Re: "Bianco" commercial

I agree with Zoundz.
Best of he ones we have seen so far.
The blurry bench, bottom left edge needs removing.
Its a shame about that black shoe in front of her foot. It took me a moment to work out what was going on with her leg.
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23-10-09, 08:33 PM
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Re: "Bianco" commercial

Great lighting - i love it x


     
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23-10-09, 09:01 PM
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Re: "Bianco" commercial

Love it except for the already mentioned shoe as at first it looks as though she's got a deformed leg.

Have to say this one is my favourite so far.
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25-10-09, 12:09 PM
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Re: "Bianco" commercial

Agree about the black shoe...looks a bit odd.

I still think you're editing is still a little harsh, in terms of the lighting and contrast, but I think this is probably the best of this series that you've shown us.

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