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21-05-11, 02:57 PM
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Model Ferrari

I picked this up a few days ago for £2.99 reduced from £10. By the name on it I can see why it's a bit out of date hahaha.

Thought it might be a nice thing to put together and photograph.


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21-05-11, 03:42 PM
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Re: Model Ferrari

I used to race 1/10 RR Cars when I was a kid - used to build them from scratch myself too

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21-05-11, 05:08 PM
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Number one to me is the most pleasing comp but the shadows are just a bit to low.
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21-05-11, 05:42 PM
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Re: Model Ferrari

Agree with Ken Good work though!

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21-05-11, 07:23 PM
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Number one to me is the most pleasing comp but the shadows are just a bit to low.
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Agree with Ken Good work though!

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Whooosh. That was it going over my head lol. Can someone explain please?


     
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21-05-11, 07:48 PM
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I can only assume what Ken meant was the same as what I mean, but what I see in the first is that for a couple of reasons it's the most pleasing image, mainly composition, but also focus. The problem seems to be it's a touch dark, too much shadow. Lightening it a bit would make a lot of difference

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21-05-11, 08:33 PM
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I can only assume what Ken meant was the same as what I mean, but what I see in the first is that for a couple of reasons it's the most pleasing image, mainly composition, but also focus. The problem seems to be it's a touch dark, too much shadow. Lightening it a bit would make a lot of difference

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21-05-11, 08:38 PM
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vroom vrooooooooooooom!


     
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21-05-11, 08:39 PM
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Any better? To much, not enough? Same one lightened up.....


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21-05-11, 08:40 PM
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