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14-02-09, 09:26 PM
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Old Architecture - Very old



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15-02-09, 09:06 AM
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Re: Old Architecture - Very old

Nice effort i like the colours although i would have liked to have seen more colour in the sky, it looks like it was an overcast day.

The stones look a little like they have too much contrast though and lack detail in the darker parts.. this could be my monitor though.

I like the 2nd picture because you have placed the T off center, this gives for a much stronger image than if you had placed it in the center of the image.

One final thing... i can't read the writing you have on the borders it needs to be simple and clear to read.


     
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15-02-09, 11:30 AM
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Re: Old Architecture - Very old

Thank you for your help, are you unable to read even at full size? If you could let me know please.

PS it was raining
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15-02-09, 11:33 AM
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Re: Old Architecture - Very old

I can read it at full size but it is the font that makes it hard to read... unless it is just me i like clear crisp writing.


     
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15-02-09, 12:59 PM
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Re: Old Architecture - Very old

Thanks, I will remember that.
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15-02-09, 03:43 PM
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Great textures there Jackie, it is a shame about the sky, but I do like the second image a lot,old architecture always amazes me. xxx


     
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15-02-09, 04:01 PM
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I love what you've done with the place Snapper! I like the second photo for it's overall composition & contrast.
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15-02-09, 05:15 PM
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Re: Old Architecture - Very old

I echos Sam's comments exactly
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15-02-09, 06:10 PM
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Re: Old Architecture - Very old

Think I had better go back and work on the sky then, there is some detail there so I should be able to improve on it. I worry a bit about over doing it because sometimes you seem to get a fringe around the trees but will have a go as that is the consensus, brighter, bolder sykes here I come, well if I can.
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15-02-09, 07:22 PM
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Re: Old Architecture - Very old

Tried again, any better,

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