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31-05-11, 02:25 PM
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Juvenile Blackbird

I don't normally do wildlife shots ( so be gentle with me ) but this Juvenile Blackbird was in my garden eating an apple I'd put out and kindly let me take a pic.



     
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31-05-11, 02:28 PM
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It's a great shot! Nice pose from the bird and sharp. Only thought I have is I would have zoomed out a bit and given the bird a bit of space around it. If you're getting some rapport from the subject I'd encourage it and shoot some more, because it's lovely opportunity
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31-05-11, 02:31 PM
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I did actually..then cropped it to show more bird , less garden.


     
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31-05-11, 02:35 PM
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That's great, but in this case I'd open out the crop a little and get the head and feet in shot xx

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31-05-11, 03:08 PM
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Try this one instead.

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31-05-11, 03:10 PM
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Yep!

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31-05-11, 03:13 PM
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Prefer the second one too Daisy - the first one is crying out for a little breathing space at the top
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31-05-11, 03:19 PM
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Prefer the second one too Daisy - the first one is crying out for a little breathing space at the top
Well it can't have it because she was stood right under my Japanese mint and it looks like a wierd hat in the original.


     
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31-05-11, 03:24 PM
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Well it can't have it because she was stood right under my Japanese mint and it looks like a wierd hat in the original.
LOL@Japanese mint!
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31-05-11, 03:26 PM
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LOL@Japanese mint!

You are right...It's Mongolian! lovely flowers.


     
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