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18-07-09, 04:45 PM
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A pleasing sunset

Title says it all, I think

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18-07-09, 04:58 PM
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Re: A pleasing sunset

Lovely colours Gaz

I'd prob crop it so there is less black on the left and bottom. If you have photoshop, select the crop tool - enter 690 px in the width, select all of the image, then hold down the shift key (to keep proportions) and move the bottom left and top right sliders in a bit.

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18-07-09, 05:06 PM
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Re: A pleasing sunset

Lovely! But do agree with azz!
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18-07-09, 05:17 PM
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Re: A pleasing sunset

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18-07-09, 05:19 PM
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Re: A pleasing sunset

That's much better!! Fantastic.
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18-07-09, 05:47 PM
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Re: A pleasing sunset

Yeah better - although I'd try to keep the proportions of the original image
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18-07-09, 06:45 PM
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Re: A pleasing sunset

To be different I would like more of the black left, tbh I prefer the first and would only suggest the cropping of about half the black on the left and if you wish to keep the same proportions then about 1" off the left and bottom.

Have you already cropped it from a larger size, as the grass? seems to have lost it's smoothness, not sure why one of the experts could perhaps tell you why that has happened.
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18-07-09, 07:55 PM
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Re: A pleasing sunset

I like the second one.
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18-07-09, 11:59 PM
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Re: A pleasing sunset

Love the crop version xx


     
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