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29-09-08, 01:08 PM
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Danielle

Here she is again in something a little different.



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29-09-08, 01:13 PM
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Re: Danielle

Feel she needs to be looking at camera to get the full seduction effect, if indeed that is what you were aiming for, IMO seduction needs the eyes. Not qualified to comment further but I do like the image.
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29-09-08, 01:17 PM
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Re: Danielle

thanx, its was more of a passive seduction, as if lieing there waiting if you get me?
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29-09-08, 01:34 PM
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Re: Danielle

Its a nice pictures - I like the skin tones.
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29-09-08, 01:35 PM
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See what you mean, I think, would she not be endanger of going to sleep, perhaps not I have never met the cameraman
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29-09-08, 03:48 PM
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Re: Danielle

Nice one Dan - I really like it

You can post the large size into your post directly Dan, the system resizes it automatically if it's too big and people just gotta click on it to enlarge
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29-09-08, 05:00 PM
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See what you mean, I think, would she not be endanger of going to sleep, perhaps not I have never met the cameraman
depends what mood both parties are in!
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29-09-08, 05:07 PM
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I'm not sure what you are after with the shot, but for me it looks like she is dead. In that I mean the fact there is no connection with the camera and the dark eyes, also the position of the arm and body and the muted tones it makes her look like a corpse.

Sorry if this offends, but just my opinion so feel free to ignore me
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29-09-08, 05:13 PM
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I think it's a good idea and nice colour, tone and appears quite natural lighting but somehow it hasn't quite pulled off. It may be the angle where we are looking up Danielle's nose, or how the light sort of shows off the shape of the underside of her nose. To be honest for me I think somehow she looks dead rather than seductive or waiting - no offence intended but it's the only way I can describe it. A pearl necklace always looks good on a girl...but those in the picture seem to be two different and just one of those would be enough...
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29-09-08, 05:21 PM
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Re: Danielle

Lol isn't it amazing how art can spark debate

I actually like all those things people are picking out, it's what makes it different for me. The only thing I would change is the pattern on the bed sheets - plain white would look more timeless, and maybe a little more lighting to the left side of the face.
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