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01-09-09, 08:57 AM
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Re: Some of the commission shots I did.

4 & 5 are really good The shadow behind the babies ear in 1 is rather distracting and the top three are sonewhat soft. Again I like the last one, but i'm not so keen on the shadows (personal preference?).
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01-09-09, 09:59 AM
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Re: Some of the commission shots I did.

I have to say that agree with Pepsieileen that while the first 3 are lovely images, that aren't 'special'.
Number 1 seems a little grey for me - could something more be done with the contrasts? Also, the shadows distract me little.
Number 2 seems a little soft to me.
Number 4 and 5 are much stronger. I like them.
I think number 6 has potential. Could you make it a funky angle or crop it differently?
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01-09-09, 10:39 AM
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Re: Some of the commission shots I did.

Thanks for the feedback all - I will go through them again and have another play the softness is simply to do with the upload, as I didn't resize properly for YOP, so the gallery automatically resizes it .

The shadows have been really driving me nuts - I also am not good enough in PSto get rid of them >

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