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18-08-09, 12:20 AM
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Bark

Love the colour in this - this is unedited - just resized and cropped accordingly.

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18-08-09, 12:31 AM
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Re: Bark

I think it's a nice colour - but as an overall image doesn't really shout anything? :/
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18-08-09, 12:39 AM
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Re: Bark

No? :/ I was thinking it was just... 'nice' which doesn't really recommend it haha! Any thoughts on what I could do to make it more striking? The composition was designed to make it striking (diagonal lines corner to corner) but I think it may have worked better if the branch was thinner... :/

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18-08-09, 09:45 AM
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Re: Bark

I agree with Azz, lovely colours, but not sure it 'makes' a photo.
The chopped off bit of bark in particular bothers me as it makes it feel less natural.
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18-08-09, 11:38 AM
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Re: Bark

I'm with you all! the more I look at it the less I like it probably one to scrap!

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18-08-09, 06:36 PM
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Re: Bark

Nice colour and a good effort!
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18-08-09, 07:37 PM
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Re: Bark

I think it's just a bit wooden.


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