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21-06-11, 07:06 PM
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Old Chain


An old rusty chain i found in a timber mill and converted to b/w
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21-06-11, 07:56 PM
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Re: Old Chain

Some interesting shapes there - perhaps you could try increasing the contrast in it? Might make it really punchy!

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21-06-11, 09:16 PM
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Re: Old Chain

Like Z says, interesting shapes.... But I have an itch to see it in colour with the rust.


     
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21-06-11, 10:21 PM
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Re: Old Chain

Have to agree with SL - rust usually looks great in colour
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22-06-11, 01:33 AM
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Re: Old Chain

I like the idea, but have to agree, would prefer it in Colour, so you can appreciate the rust


     
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22-06-11, 08:31 AM
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Re: Old Chain

I think potentially for shapes and detail you have an interesting subject but I don't think as it stands this picture captures the artistic interest. Maybe it is worth seeing in colour, but I suspect it is a sort of gloss 'hammerite paint' black, maybe with a bit of rust, maybe not, as it doesn't look old.

Why doesn't it capture my interest? My eye wanders all over without settling. I am drawn to the interesting shape and detail on the right, but on the left it is just a mass of grey/black with nothing really happening. The footprint on the left doesn't feature in the image for any reason, and the foliage isn't cold, hard, mechanical like the intended object.

This could be an interesting little subject matter with the right lighting to pick out all the tones, detail and subtleties. You need some control over a strong directional light to pick out the detail, crop out the unnecessary and compose to try and lead the eye on a path into the picture. Overall it needs to be pin sharp as still life studies are, be it a f2.8 or f16. None of that costs money, just a bit more time to set it up. I think it would work in mono, however as others have said it may work in colour if there is rusty coloured bits in there, maybe the rivitted hinges. You could strike luck and see that item lit by early morning or eveing sun which is contrasty and warmer in tone and it could look really good. Just my tuppance worth.
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22-06-11, 12:25 PM
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Re: Old Chain

I think that's an excellent and well considered post Stu very useful!

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24-06-11, 05:03 PM
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Re: Old Chain

Thanks for your comments guys. For all those who wanted to see the pic in colour..
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24-06-11, 06:15 PM
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Just my opinion (which doesn't mean anything) but I like it in colour. I can see much more of the shapes and my eye is drawn to the light link.


     
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24-06-11, 08:54 PM
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Re: Old Chain

3654 times better in black and white......but what do I know


     
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