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19-11-09, 04:36 PM
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"Platekompaniet" Christmas Ad



So today I had another shoot for "Amfi Magasinet". I shot three photos today as well. This is the first for you guys.

Nikon D700 with 50 f/1.4 with ND8

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AB1600 in large octabox boomed a little to the left
AB1600 in gigantic softbox to the right
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19-11-09, 06:36 PM
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Re: "Platekompaniet" Christmas Ad

I quite like this one Tommy. It works well. Nice lighting and nice DOF too.

I'd be tempted to lose some of that head room though, but that's just me.


     
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19-11-09, 06:46 PM
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Re: "Platekompaniet" Christmas Ad

Thanks

The magazine pages are a bit wider than this crop, so the top will be cut when it hits the print
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Nikon 35mm f/2.0
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19-11-09, 08:52 PM
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Re: "Platekompaniet" Christmas Ad

I really really like this, the lighting is great, the DOF is just about perfect (I'd have preferred to see the hands in focus too - but that's just me perhaps ) and the only little thing I would do is clone out some of the distraction at the top of the photo - like the shine in the top right corner. If it's being cropped a bit too, so much the better, as I agree a little headroom gone would improve.

Very nice image indeed!

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Nikon D800
Nikkor 50mm f1.4
Nikkor 24-70mm f2.8
Nikkor 105 mm f2.8 macro
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19-11-09, 11:17 PM
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Re: "Platekompaniet" Christmas Ad

Nice image!
I agree that cropping the lights would be more pleasing and those fuzzy hands bother me a bit but overall good job!
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20-11-09, 12:08 AM
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Re: "Platekompaniet" Christmas Ad

Like it! Nice work T
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