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09-10-10, 01:17 PM
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Eye on You



I've been doing a lot more street photography. Some of the purists aren't seeking perfection in every image as if it is club competition, simply a reflection of life on the street. Obviously strong images help...or images that capture the imagination, make you think...
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09-10-10, 02:27 PM
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Re: Eye on You

That's nice, I would actually consider cropping, removing about 45 pixels from the left and 55 from the right... making it more focused.
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09-10-10, 03:06 PM
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Re: Eye on You

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That's nice, I would actually consider cropping, removing about 45 pixels from the left and 55 from the right - and making it more focused.
NA something like 45.516 pix from the left and 55.751 from the right to be more exact.

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09-10-10, 03:29 PM
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Re: Eye on You

What a fun image.
I agree that experimenting with a tighter crop would be worth a try. Maybe try loosing the hands from the right.
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09-10-10, 03:53 PM
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Re: Eye on You

I agree on a tighter crop - and while I'm not sure if the image works for me, it certainly does make you look twice, and I think it has the effect you're after! I like it a lot - despite it not being the sort of thing I'd hang on my wall!

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14-10-10, 02:31 PM
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Re: Eye on You

Argh I wasn't on pixels lol, so make that 83 and 160 ish to the edge of the ballon on the left, and just at the removal point of the hand on the right.
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