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17-05-09, 10:32 AM
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Re: Portrait of me

I prefer the first, or as someone else says something inbetween the two would be better. Something about the stare doesn't do it for me, don't know why though.
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17-05-09, 10:42 AM
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Re: Portrait of me

I actually just found a section General Photos... I am sorry for posting in Art of Photography...

Well, this is new photo, something in between the previous two



perrodeagua: The way I look is not ok? Well, I think I need new photo...
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17-05-09, 11:13 AM
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Re: Portrait of me

I think that's much more natural! There's still a bit of an odd glow to it - but it's much much better, and I like it a lot. The eyes are very intense!

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17-05-09, 12:06 PM
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Re: Portrait of me

Not sure about either, sorry, think I would like something in the middle, not so dramatic. Of the two I think I prefer the second darker one as the first is a bit scary.

EDIT: just seen the middle one and I am still not sure, something is not quite right around the eyes.
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17-05-09, 04:31 PM
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Re: Portrait of me

I am not sure of the first two, though I do prefer the darker version, but for me the recent edit works best . Azz is right, you do have amazing eyes

I like the lighting just not sure of the pose.


     
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17-05-09, 05:02 PM
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Re: Portrait of me

The latest edit is my fave
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18-05-09, 12:03 PM
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New one is much better! - The lighting was to flat on #1 so you didnt have any detail in the face.

You could really work those eyes playng with levels and curves! (hope you dont mind the edit)



     
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18-05-09, 12:23 PM
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Re: Portrait of me

Thanks all. At the end I decided, that I don't like this photo at all... So I have to find some other better photo.

Daisy Chains: thank you very much for your help and instrucitons, Very usefull for all other stuff too! I will try to do it and show.
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18-05-09, 12:37 PM
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Re: Portrait of me

Excellent and helpful edit there Sam!

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18-05-09, 12:49 PM
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Re: Portrait of me

Not very helpful! LOL iv put curves rather than levels! Oooopps! ill correct in a mo!


     
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