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Kids & Christmas Clothing
Another shot from the shoot for "Amfi Magasinet" I did today. Really, really happy with this one. This is suppose to show off christmas clothes for kids.
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Good photo technically but I don't like the pose/set-up sorry Tommy - I would have though a more natural shot (ie them not looking at the camera) work better for an ad :-/
Or if they were gonna look at the camera, make the pose a little more 'cheeky' or elaborate - ie to portray an element of fun that is synonymous with children. (Like hey kids after the count to three pull a cheeky face! Or sommin!)
Or if they were gonna look at the camera, make the pose a little more 'cheeky' or elaborate - ie to portray an element of fun that is synonymous with children. (Like hey kids after the count to three pull a cheeky face! Or sommin!)
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Thanks man.
The client were there to direct them, so not much I could do about that
The client were there to direct them, so not much I could do about that
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Doesn't work for me I'm afraid.
I'm finding that they are blending into the background clutter a bit. They are wearing white and black against black and white things.
The lighting also feels a bit too harsh for me.
I'm finding that they are blending into the background clutter a bit. They are wearing white and black against black and white things.
The lighting also feels a bit too harsh for me.
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Agree with both Azz and LM - a more natural pose would have helped, of course, if the client wanted them in these exact positions, you couldn't do much about that, but again, they blend into a cluttered background. I would have done away with the mirror too.
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