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20-08-09, 12:11 PM
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Your Unmarked Grave IIIII



So, here's a shot from the first location we were at. Like the other shots better I think, but I think this one is alright as well. Not completely satisfied with the lighting in this one though.

www.myspace.com/yourunmarkedgrave

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AB1600 in beauty dish boomed out over group a little to the left
AB1600 in gigantic softbox a little to the right for fill
AB1600 in large octabox back righ for a little rim
AB1600 bare boomed out behind them on the left for rim
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20-08-09, 12:43 PM
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Re: Your Unmarked Grave IIIII

It won't load for me! I'm only getting the first couple of inches or so but I've seen it on MySpace.
This is my very favourite of all of them.
For some reason, the colours are very different on the MySpace. The one here (what I can see of it) is much redder. Most noticably in the clouds. I prefer the MySpace colours.
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20-08-09, 01:12 PM
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Re: Your Unmarked Grave IIIII

I haven't seen the myspace one, but I don't like this as much as the others, mainly because I don't think the angle is as flattering, and the lighting not as good for me. I find that it gives a waxy look to the skin again. Definitely prefer the last ones. Still having said that it's not a bad shot at all... and I reall appreciate the work you've done on it. Great location too! Well done!

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20-08-09, 01:58 PM
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Re: Your Unmarked Grave IIIII

This is my favourite one of the lot Tommy. Why?

Because it has attitude, which I think suits the band very well (after listening to their stuff) and I love the way the clouds add to it - it's like one of those time-lapse nature movies you often see. It may not be what you wanted technically - but as an image it is superb. You should be very proud!!

The only thing I would edit out is the house front in the background, I think it'd be better to keep the area a mystery.
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20-08-09, 02:40 PM
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Re: Your Unmarked Grave IIIII

^^ What he said, exactly my thoughts as well
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20-08-09, 03:56 PM
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This is my favourite one of the lot Tommy. Why?
Because it has attitude, which I think suits the band very well
My thoughts too.
I love the pose, the angles and the sky.

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The only thing I would edit out is the house front in the background, I think it'd be better to keep the area a mystery.
I hadn't noticed that but now you have mentioned it I keep getting my eye drawn to it. That house is a bit too surburbs so I'd loose it if you could.
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20-08-09, 09:27 PM
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Re: Your Unmarked Grave IIIII

Yip this one is better by far! Except the background, at the blonde haired guys head! He seems to fade into it! Apart from that! Its fantastic.
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