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Join Date: Dec 2009
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An old completely broken house
Hello friends
Hope you doing fine.
Today i brought another new pic taken by me.
Its a house actually (was).
on a haunted mountain.
only the semi-front wall with a single window are standing there.
it's ruined. but tells that there used to be a house some 100 years before.
Sure there were some histories ran over it.
It talks about the time left behind.
Well, let me be honest here.
I did some HDR works on the rocks and manipulated some lightroom lights on the sky.
That's all and nothing more.
Tell me , how much you like it.
Hope you doing fine.
Today i brought another new pic taken by me.
Its a house actually (was).
on a haunted mountain.
only the semi-front wall with a single window are standing there.
it's ruined. but tells that there used to be a house some 100 years before.
Sure there were some histories ran over it.
It talks about the time left behind.
Well, let me be honest here.
I did some HDR works on the rocks and manipulated some lightroom lights on the sky.
That's all and nothing more.
Tell me , how much you like it.
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Think it works well - nice work 
I would like to see the rocks their natural colour tho, guess they'd work well with that sky..
I would like to see the rocks their natural colour tho, guess they'd work well with that sky..
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I agree with Azz.
It's a nice effect but I'd prefer it looking a bit more natural, but then most HDRIs don't look natural..not completely.
You're also still getting that unwanted glow around your foreground. I'd try harder to fix that.
Over all, it's a nice composition, and the thick black border sets it off well.
Good stuff
It's a nice effect but I'd prefer it looking a bit more natural, but then most HDRIs don't look natural..not completely.
You're also still getting that unwanted glow around your foreground. I'd try harder to fix that.
Over all, it's a nice composition, and the thick black border sets it off well.
Good stuff
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Interesting image with lots of interest.
Not so keen on that glow though.
Not so keen on that glow though.
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I love the subject matter, think it would work really well in Mono.
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Apart from that 'glow' which has already been mentioned I think it's a nice shot. The composition is good and I like the way we're looking up, seeing the sky through the window.
I bet it would make a good black and white shot too.
I bet it would make a good black and white shot too.
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