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05-05-11, 11:21 AM
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05-05-11, 01:50 PM
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Re: Kisses

That's nice Daisy, but I think I would prefer it without the yellow one there.
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05-05-11, 02:32 PM
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Re: Kisses

I love the exposure and sharpness of the white daffodil but somehow wish it was displayed with different surroundings. The yellow flower leads the eye off the frame so I'm not keen on the composition. Since this scenario looks to have been posed I'm not sure how I could solve the compositional challenge.
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05-05-11, 02:50 PM
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Re: Kisses

Thanks guys..I see what you mean about the composition although it wasn't posed, just the way they were on the bench while more were being gathered.

Appreciate your comments and have taken them on board.


     
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05-05-11, 09:13 PM
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Re: Kisses

I love the white daffodil, it looks so striking the centre colour almost like paint bleeding into the white area.
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05-05-11, 09:15 PM
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Re: Kisses

Personally I like it BECAUSE it looks informal
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05-05-11, 11:05 PM
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Re: Kisses

Thank you everyone.

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