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26-11-10, 10:59 PM
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The Tweed

Took this last weekend. I deliberately got down lower to the water, but looking at it now, I think it might have been better if I had stood up to get a clearer view of the water flow pattern?



One minute I look at it and like it, the next I'm not so sure..would like to know what you guys think.
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27-11-10, 12:24 AM
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Re: The Tweed

I see nothing wrong with the angle, but what I do see is the photograph needs straightening. Once that is done then the sweep of the water will enhance the image, in my view.
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27-11-10, 01:45 AM
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Re: The Tweed

Agree with Fogey.

I'd also consider playing around with a different crops.
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27-11-10, 03:33 PM
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Re: The Tweed

Thank you. Now you've both said about the wonkiness (is there such a word!) I can see exactly what you mean.
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29-11-10, 09:14 AM
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Re: The Tweed

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Nice job I like it
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