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18-10-08, 02:50 PM
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In the spotlight

Im a bit about this one...

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18-10-08, 03:02 PM
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Re: In the spotlight

It's beautifully shot, and the light is wonderful.


     
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18-10-08, 03:06 PM
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Re: In the spotlight

Looks neat - you look great

I would maybe do it again, this time not with your neck at that angle, but a bit more 'back'? Hmmm not sure lol
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18-10-08, 03:31 PM
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"Hey, leave it out will ya! Me hormones are goin' through da roof!"

I was getting worried, I had to scroll down to see the pic and I wasn't sure what was coming...head, shoulders, skin...oh err...then a sigh of relief. I'm on tablets for my blood pressure...

Nice picture...really looks a quality image... If I have to be critical (which I don't of course!) I would suggest the top of the dress looks a little awkward on the right as viewed and the way the light is on the right er, boob, looks a little odd. Maybe it's been PP's or else the shadow makes it look irregular shaped. Nice pic though, straight out of a mag and the milky white skin, good make up and soft glow on the skin all looks good.
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18-10-08, 03:41 PM
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Re: In the spotlight

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It's beautifully shot, and the light is wonderful.
Thanks Hun! I was waiting ages for the sunlight to come trough the window above the door

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Looks neat - you look great

I would maybe do it again, this time not with your neck at that angle, but a bit more 'back'? Hmmm not sure lol
Yeah im not sure either LOL Ill look at a reshoot at some other point. Iv lost the light for the day now!

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"Hey, leave it out will ya! Me hormones are goin' through da roof!"

I was getting worried, I had to scroll down to see the pic and I wasn't sure what was coming...head, shoulders, skin...oh err...then a sigh of relief. I'm on tablets for my blood pressure...

Nice picture...really looks a quality image... If I have to be critical (which I don't of course!) I would suggest the top of the dress looks a little awkward on the right as viewed and the way the light is on the right er, boob, looks a little odd. Maybe it's been PP's or else the shadow makes it look irregular shaped. Nice pic though, straight out of a mag and the milky white skin, good make up and soft glow on the skin all looks good.
Well i do like to build up the excitement! LOL

Yeah i know what you mean about the shadowing on my...............
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LOL. Its a side effect of wearing a long corset. It squishes everything up and at the wrong angle, can look odd if your not used to it. Ill see if i can rectify it more in post..... (thanks for the milky white com too! I lurv being pale


     
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18-10-08, 04:09 PM
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I am a Gentleman, I am a Gentleman, I am a Gentleman...........Ack!! PHOOOOOOWAAAR!

Great pic - it must take you ages faffing about prepping, setting up, getting the light, distances, focus right. great work - you should start a dedicated KK Gallery!


     
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18-10-08, 04:14 PM
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I am a Gentleman, I am a Gentleman, I am a Gentleman...........Ack!! PHOOOOOOWAAAR!

Great pic - it must take you ages faffing about prepping, setting up, getting the light, distances, focus right. great work - you should start a dedicated KK Gallery!
LOL thankyou

Would it be bad to say it didnt take more than 2 mins to set up

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18-10-08, 04:36 PM
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LOL thankyou

Would it be bad to say it didnt take more than 2 mins to set up
...so you are telling us you were just doing the ironing dressed like that when you suddenly had an idea for a picture! Bloomin' 'eck...

My neighbours are just boring old f**ts...why can't I have a neighbour like you to drool over!

Second pic works for me as although it's a staged and unnatural pose it's sort of more believable and doesn't look so awkward.
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18-10-08, 04:38 PM
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Re: In the spotlight

Love the idea but not sure about the pose, you look a bit tense, particularly in the neck and the raised arm. Now would like to make suggestions about the pose but not sure I can help.

This sort of pose would usually be attempted laying down, I may be wrong but I think you are seated or standing.

You, as always, look spot on and the make up is perfect it is just a bit uncomfortable to look at.

EDIT sorry took me a while to decide how honest I could be and there have been a few posts between my deciding to reply and actually posting it. Can't see a second picture though, has it been posted and withdrawn whilst I was making up my mind.
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18-10-08, 04:41 PM
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...so you are telling us you were just doing the ironing dressed like that when you suddenly had an idea for a picture! Bloomin' 'eck...

My neighbours are just boring old f**ts...why can't I have a neighbour like you to drool over!

Second pic works for me as although it's a staged and unnatural pose it's sort of more believable and doesn't look so awkward.
Well no, i wasnt doing the ironing! LOL But yeah i do wear corsets quite often and my hair is up today because its in dire need of a wash I think our neigbours would prefer me to be more boring. Im always getting odd looks off them

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