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24-11-09, 02:10 PM
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Seashots - Any thoughts?

Really want some critique on this - not sure if it works



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24-11-09, 05:51 PM
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Re: Seashots - Any thoughts?

Nice shots JL Can;t really offer critique, as I'm not sure with this sort of thing. Perhaps long exposure would have been better, but you'd have needed filters - as the sun was soooo bright!

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24-11-09, 05:59 PM
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Re: Seashots - Any thoughts?

I like them both - just not the border
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24-11-09, 08:07 PM
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Re: Seashots - Any thoughts?

Interesting images but I'm not sure how well they work as a pair as they don't seem to balance each other - and certainly not with that border.
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24-11-09, 09:47 PM
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Re: Seashots - Any thoughts?

I think they work well as a pair - it's the before and after shot - though I still think they'd be better the other way around. Not sure about the border either. What border would others suggest?

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25-11-09, 02:07 PM
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Re: Seashots - Any thoughts?

I would suggest a thinner slate grey border.
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25-11-09, 06:45 PM
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Re: Seashots - Any thoughts?

That could work! When I was helping Christy with it, we couldn't settle on anything suitable - and I'm just not good enough in photoshop for borders *ahem*...

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25-11-09, 08:16 PM
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Re: Seashots - Any thoughts?

I tried it out earlier and it worked much better dark grey - and thinner.
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