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27-06-08, 06:47 PM
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Re: Time for my close up!

I think it's pretty neat, however I would drop the border, I think it is too distracting.

Although orange and blue are complimentary colours, I would tone the orange down to give more emphasis on the eyes The only other thing is the skin looks a tad too washed out - I would try toning the effect down or, going more extreme just to see how it turns out.

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27-06-08, 07:06 PM
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Re: Time for my close up!

KK - can you add the original picture you posted back in? I just think it would be useful to see how you change the image based on the C&C received (also I would just like to see the shot that the early comments are based on ).
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27-06-08, 08:50 PM
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Re: Time for my close up!

What a beautiful eyes... I like blue x orange combination, but I have no clue what CC menas...
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27-06-08, 08:52 PM
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Re: Time for my close up!

cc................constructive criticism................oh and welcome
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27-06-08, 08:57 PM
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Re: Time for my close up!

Aaaaaaaaaaa....ok, now I know.. Thanks
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27-06-08, 08:58 PM
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C&C = Comments & Critique

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27-06-08, 08:59 PM
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DOH!!! Sorry Azz is right, but I was nearly right.ha ha
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27-06-08, 09:07 PM
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What a beautiful eyes... I like blue x orange combination, but I have no clue what CC menas...
Thankyou T I spend alot of PP (post processing) on eyes, as most people will tell you - Im glad you like them - Mind you it helps having good eyes in the first place!!

Azz, im not sure about toning down the orange, iv already done that in the eyes and dont want to loose the vibrant look it has - Illtake a look at his skin though


     
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27-06-08, 09:21 PM
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Re: Time for my close up!

Prefer the 2nd one although I find the white bit in the bottom right corner a bit distracting. Dead quick to clone the red over it so perhaps worth doing
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27-06-08, 09:47 PM
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Re: Time for my close up!

Can't do techie much either lol - but I think the face has... i don't know... yellow tones? erm, set off by the blue perhaps? I think the colours may be a tad too vibrant - i do liek the shot though!

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