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21-10-10, 05:16 PM
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Amfi Cover



Today I shot the cover for the first of two "Amfi Magasinet" christmas issues. This is the result I ended up with, and I'm pretty satisfied!

Nikon D700 with 85 f/1.8

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21-10-10, 06:04 PM
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Re: Amfi Cover

Hi Tommy, beautiful model, love the colours and skin tones, my only criticism is that her nose breaks the line of her cheek. Better if she was turned slightly to her left or the camera moved to the right. Generally if the nose breaks the cheek line then it should be a complete profile.

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21-10-10, 06:40 PM
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Re: Amfi Cover

Lovely shot Tommy - and now Jeff mentions it, I can see what he means.. it looks a tiny bit odd under her nose and her right cheek. Great advice Jeff!
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24-10-10, 05:50 PM
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Re: Amfi Cover

I agree with Jeff's advice - but otherwise great portrait with lovely Xmassy feel!

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