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20-01-09, 10:28 PM
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20-01-09, 10:34 PM
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Re: Untitled (contains nudity)

You ever thought of becoming a Sandra Bullock Lookalike!



Spitting double imo.

Not sure on the wings, take them away and imo it would help.
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20-01-09, 10:37 PM
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AW thankyou!

Iv added the original now - i just fancied being a bit flamboyant in the first


     
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20-01-09, 11:22 PM
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Nice stuff KK!
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21-01-09, 11:41 AM
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I'm not sure of these KK I'm not sure the rain effect works with the wings

I am not keen on the original shot, it's not the nudity, it is something I can't explain. I 'm not making sense am I You don't look at ease, but not in a vulnerable way either, as I think that would of worked. Not helping much am I? xxx


     
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21-01-09, 03:35 PM
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If we ever meet I think I would have to use the classic opener, sorry, didn't recognise you with your clothes on! The rain effect is different and makes it unusual and well done. The 'standard' nude is ok but not really so special for me, looks fine but doesn't leap out at me and if I am not mistaken on my business laptop with so-so screen, there appear to be undie lines on your hips?
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21-01-09, 07:58 PM
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Re: Untitled (contains nudity)

The first doesn't really work for me, think would be better without the rain and just the wings.

#2 is defo the one, like BC says some undie marks maybe worth cloning out. Otherwise I really like the shot and the subject
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21-01-09, 11:00 PM
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i like no 2, especially the natural look to the face and eyes


     
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22-01-09, 02:31 AM
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Top marks for posting them and from a technical point of view they're great.

Unless your after a nude thing....I think that you're close to giving an expression (face and eyes) that has more impact as just a head and shoulders shot.
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22-01-09, 09:26 PM
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I think Phil is right the head and shoulder shot alone makes a really nice shot! and Mrs Finney clone out them underwear lines! lol
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