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Have you cropped the right hand side off the image Jols?? Maybe leaving as much on right hand side as there is on left....
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I like it! Agree a tighter crop may work, might be nice if you could get the tops of the fence posts in too 
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Agree with the above comments, just needs a tweak for a smashing shot.
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I would just have moved the crop along a bit so that the wooden fence frame is there on the left but not the sea, so that your looking through the frame and not at it. That's just what I would have done though, depends what you want the main feature to be I suppose?
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I will follow everyone and say tighter crop, even though it is a well caught shot what with the wave.
If you do go back I'd have a shot exactly how it is, but without any frame in the foreground. Stand on the other side of the breaker, and wear wellies
If you do go back I'd have a shot exactly how it is, but without any frame in the foreground. Stand on the other side of the breaker, and wear wellies
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well I love it ,but that would not stop me taking a couple more one with the uprights on the edge making a frame and one with the uprights on the thirds then Id see which was best ,but as I say still a cracking shot in my book
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I think I would have to try all of the suggested here. I'm picturing the suggestion and I like each one of them. I love the color mix. Beautiful.
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There is something in this shot that make it appealing, but at the same time it looks awkward, but I'm not sure what the right answer is 
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