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07-05-09, 11:13 AM
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Emilys 13th Birthday!

Here are a few shots taken from a friends daughters 13th birthday shoot! hope you like them and please feel free to C&C.
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07-05-09, 11:50 AM
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Re: Emilys 13th Birthday!

Overall the set of shots are impressive, guess one could go through them and pick on one or two that are perhaps not as pleasing as you would hope but most are great.

I will pick on just one that is 15 love the idea but think the girl at the front should be sharper then the misty focus on the girls at the back would be fine, think it may be model problem as I am sure your intention was for the girl in the foreground to be sharp.

My favourite changes each time I look but I think 4 good way to get over the problem of getting everyone in shot and it gives an idea of the fun of the occasion.
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07-05-09, 12:40 PM
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Re: Emilys 13th Birthday!

Some fabulous fun shots,Mr Finney XXX


     
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07-05-09, 01:50 PM
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Re: Emilys 13th Birthday!

Hard to crit when there are so many - but 90% of them are great! I love number five. My only real crit is that I'd like to see some of the others in better focus - they seem a tad soft. Excellent, fun set of shots though!

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07-05-09, 03:28 PM
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Re: Emilys 13th Birthday!

Some really good work there FB!

Only thing I can pick up really is some of them are a tad soft.
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